Hi ^.^

I just finish a lot of my homework, so im just gonna post this poem i wrote like a month or a couple of weeks ago when i was a little crazy w/ things and stuff >:) ok not really i was kinda bored when i wrote this. Well here's the poem it might not make much sense.


Rain falls from the silent sky
filling up the spinning world
soon quietness fills the air
like an epidemic it spreads
putting a soft "hush" on all things
pulling out the movement with a swift step
Alas now, all is silent, all is still
As the rain falls

On the confused world
a willow sad and lone
stood with silent sob
Against a golden gate
hung a quiet heart broken and wrunged
All is silent All is still
As the rain falls



ummmm.......... ok let me know if you guys think this is enough or do i need more. and help me think up of a title >.<